Black Poetry : Now...(written for a lost friend)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Feb 22, 2004.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ascend
    Increase
    Experience freedom
    Take to the air with weightless wings and trod upon the clouds
    Find your place in the endless sky
    Shed your shackles upon the horizons of time and leap into eternity
    Quick! while there's still time

    Say your goodbyes
    Make your peace
    Prepare your eyes to see God
    Inhale the aroma of real life
    Forget the old and embrace the new
    For life has finally begun
    Turn your eyes upward
    Quick! while there's still time

    Listen to the sounds of eternity
    Lay upon the angel's breast
    Unite with everlasting peace
    Let your spirit enjoy this rest
    Forget the life behind you and embrace your destiny
    Quick! while there's still time

    (I'll always miss you....)
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wonderful
    thanks for sharing with us.....
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like this was written for someone to embrace eternity, anyway, this was beautifully written.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribing poet keep flowin
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RE: to twision

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alpha indeed but truely u can't judge poetry of a poet's mind
     
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