Black Poetry : NOW She Gives A ****...

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She had a huge piece of my heart
    when it exhibited naivete

    nonetheless…

    although it was young and inexperienced

    it was always true…

    I opened my gifted inner self to her

    Speaking volumes through my love for
    a first beloved several years matured
    than my own…

    She had said she loved me…

    causing

    my quiet soul

    to reciprocate same…

    Mouthing the words

    I LOVE YOU TOO

    and meaning it to the deepest depths
    of truth

    With this sanctity of love etched
    permanently in my mind,
    I ventured into the world to find
    myself and become a man…

    keeping her within me and my spirit

    Now connected to a soulmate, I
    left her with her faithful promise
    that she would surely await my return

    I was gone for a moment but hurtful
    circumstances that transpired seemed
    like a lifetime ago…

    for her

    I returned to find myself in struggle with
    a lost love…trying to win her affection
    back at any cost but…

    I could not…

    for

    she loved another when she swore
    she would love only me

    she married in spite of my plea
    to reconsider her selfishness

    she bore children with another
    in violation of her vow that her
    first born would be mine, hers, ours

    Truth be told, I cried…

    My young heart became older, wiser,
    stronger because of the tears I shed

    Time passed and my hurt of a first love
    lost had passed…

    I had healed

    Her life is in ruins and she professes to
    this day that she wishes she could do
    it all over again

    because

    she knows
    whom she loves and
    who loved her in
    return

    The irony of it all?

    NOW she gives a ****…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q

    Very emotional peice dog! I feel you!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now she care

    man dis piece take me to
    when she cared for me
    dis love i gave was so true
    yet she let whats outside in
    and after all she cared more
    then she knew....ya emotional vibe is well felt:eek:
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    that was too real bruh. been there done that. ain't that a trip? this piece was tight bruh. keep doing what you been doing. blessing the page with your vibe

    peace
    blak
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas - Thanks for the read - it be like that on the real!!!

    $R - Thanks for feelin' this piece...

    Shery - You know how it be sometimes, the true brothas get hurt in the end...but we survive...

    Blak - A long, hard trip bro!!!! This piece, I feel, can relate to a lot of us brothas on vibe from the heart in any relationship...

    Thanks all for the read!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    late...the wind blew...

    but LATE doesn't necessarily mean TOO LATE. a dear friend once told me...sometimes, love is enuff to sustain us through the WRONG times.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Wow, this is a deeper side with some serious overtones. I love the way you molded this piece ...

    Keep on doin' whatcha' do....


    Always :heart:

    N2
     
  8. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome!

    I loved this Mr. GQ. Very nice and oh so true!!!!
     
  9. j'hiah

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    dang, that's deep.
    a lot o' peeps need your strength.

    peace be
    jh.
     
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