Black Poetry : Now i see u for who u are!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Dec 12, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I now see you for who you are

    I was once blind
    Seeing you only with loves eyes
    You were beautiful
    I needed you
    I loved you
    Then you showed your true colors

    Now I can see you for who you really are
    You are ugly
    I dont need you
    I hate you

    I cried rivers of tears for you
    Everything I did reminded me of you
    But I have since moved on

    You cut me deep
    But my wounds will heal
    as will my heart
    All I need is time
    And that is what life is
    It is time
    Time to heal the wounds
    That you have made
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very emotional flowing i think we been there but ya heal
    nice write enjoyed it...Angel
     
  3. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u mzblkangel. Ur my true sistah in CHRIST!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep emotions flowing here well felt too
    we all cross this path but the blessing is
    we heal and move forward as u will
    very felt flow........I SEE Y U THE POET OF THE WEEK !
    u express da feelings so well
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These emotions were felt sista, and although it hurts, we do move on in life eventually. Emotively felt poet.
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    da truth

    Speak the truth, girl. I've been there and I felt these words so deep to my heart.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh our past poetess of the week :)

    This was real my sista :)

    Loved it :)