Black Poetry : now I know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Jun 24, 2007.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now our baby is born
    healthy and strong
    and i must face reality
    it's hard to say goodbye to ALL my fantasies

    i guess i'll have to make some new ones
    how much fun can us two have
    well, i do remember when we first met
    soaking wet, sharing a champagne bubble bath
    the die-hard laughs with loofahs scrubbing lumbar
    and splash!

    the walks and talks and dinners
    me being a good sport and you a winner
    times we shared
    but, now it seems as if you don't care
    like you rolling out on four brand new rims
    and i'm the spare

    do i dare ask why?
    it can make a grown man cry
    depending on the one you're dealing with
    which eye and how high

    and now that we are separated
    we can't stand one another
    you are my baby and my baby's mother
    now i know i love you like no other
    sometimes i can't stand your ***
    for acting so undercover

    undercover girl in a out-of-the-closet world
    now i know i must tell you
    how eve strayed and adam stayed
    when that whisperer befell you

    know his many forms for he is a master of deceit
    and he hates happy couples like you and me
    true indeed he has power
    but, not like yours and mine
    now i know the secret of love
    and i'm gonna let it shine... divine
    :kiss1:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece took me back to when love was fresh and new, such joy and freedom in that. Even good changes can cause stress, but we are able to surmount this, I believe that love can conquer all. Ending on that positive note, made me smile. Another wonderful write, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cascading memories of new sweet love at it's finest
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sha'iyn:
    The feelng is this piece is deep.
    I hope you 2 are able to work things
    out. If not you be the best father you can
    be. As always your pen moves me.


    Much Luv
     
  5. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    watzinaname
    your criticism is always whatchamacallit wonderful!

    $rich$
    throw some deez on it, then! proshate the luv, homie!

    4everluv
    things fall apart but, i'm just trying not to get depressed
    it's hard change a person and even harder to find a replacement
    so, i'm going to keep talking 'til i'm blue in the face
     
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    Beautiful writing
     
  7. MenNefer

    MenNefer Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Realistic

    The recreation of oneself through Holy Matrimony.
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes yes

    feeling the growth of a man here

    peace poet

    and good luck

    and goodwill to you and your family
     
  9. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poet...absolutely beautiful
     
  10. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    REAL TALK...

    Love... once u define it, u find it... Fiyah...