Black Poetry : November

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Nov 7, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    November they say
    is the month of harvest
    however, what is its use
    if a seed is planted
    in barren land

    nothing ever grows
    for plants can only sprout
    from fertile land

    don't you understand
    love takes time to grow

    A Friend they say
    is a friend forever
    however, what happens
    when there is a sudden
    change in weather

    new conditions
    start to arise and develop
    in how we define a true
    friend

    don't you comprehend
    love and friendship
    never ends

    sometimes people rush
    things not getting
    anywhere in life too
    fast

    if you seek a bountiful
    harvest put GOD first
    and save the rest for
    last

    for someone who has been
    there for you when the
    time has come to past




    lana1287 productions
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic...beautiful and seasonally true!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice scribe poet!
     
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    very beautiful flow indeed dis here was sweet ! flow on poet...
     
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    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic delight

    glad i found it, thanks. i like the flow & luv the rhyme pattern

    i think u hv insight on friendships.
     
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    the depths of friendship...for the one who comprehends its meaning. let us harvest the fruitages of our friendships...daily.

    THANK YOU.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what's up?

    nice peace, truly.
    :thanks: nfinite...
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful scribe! God's Love is evidence of an everlasting friendship and so from His love, do we learn to cultivate, nourish and share love and yield lasting friendships...Thanx for sharing this piece
     
  9. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Thank You RedLady

    i appreciate your sentiments

    pd :)

    :heart:
     
  10. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    klabo

    thanx for stopping by to show me love

    :heart: :D

    keep flowin poet

    :toast:

    pd
     
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