Black Poetry : NOVEMBER RAIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Winter spray blanket of love
    like showers in rain down from above
    da gentle caress brisk in our morrow
    covered tenderly like sapphire my heart borrows

    Trees all naked ((shaking)) bare
    your love was cuddlely showin ya care
    as the month continue days fare
    sweet harmony i feel you there

    Venture throughda zone of tyme
    your beautiful sparkle like sunshine
    raining down on me slo
    keeps my mind into a love flo

    Out of an distance forth thy hand
    touching mentally hearts bland
    I hear your roar from afar
    lookin into novembers northren star

    You are my november rain
    without you near nothing da same
    just another wet day to claim
    dat leaves a scar of a burning flame
    :rain::rain::rain::rain::rain:
    Hold me one more time !


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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ MAN

    i see you into this november thing...and the rain it brings...as winter begins to show its ugly head...as falling leaves...and naked trees...and make-believe gives us another reason to endure this season of COLD HEARTS.

    flow whatcha know, $$RICHMAN$$
     
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    Well, my heart was here all rosey in clover,
    waiting for love in the mist of October.

    Nowhere was you to even be found
    yet here a month later...you come around?

    So, onward bound I choose to go...
    and little did you care to know,
    That November is just 'One month of many,
    when to keep it real, I needed plenty!!

    But, sometimes we learn just a little too late,
    hands are re-dealt, as so our fate.

    Next time you approach the month of November,
    there's surely one thing you'll always remember!!

    Is the fact that I require love every day of the year
    cause without any questions...I think that's only fair.​
     
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    Thankz Baller .......Man November hold the begining into the next stage .
     
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    I felt your heart in sweet October
    Remember my dear i was him in da land rover
    workin ya love deep under cover
    alwayz held ya love like no other brother

    But you came to me in rainy November
    out da shadows of sweet october
    cascading like da forest of nakedness
    dat spin my heart into a bliss

    Daily love i seal wit a kiss
    from da glist of ya humble mist
    ya my north star from afar
    holds da key to my heart

    Even though u move along
    yet ya ear heard my song
    as my love headed back home
    us together we cuddle on

    Hold me one more time !!


    :qqb015:
     
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    Oh, my bad ...conciter yourself 'held :toast:
    nice flow, thanks :D
     
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    NO.....thank u sis for the fun play and mental venture.
     
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    Novermber Rain, beautiful Sir Richness!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
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    Thank you sister Cocobutterskyn
     
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    Beautiful...

    Puts me in the mood of a "Sweet November"
    and the rain.....always brings the sadness when love is loss.



    e:heart:
     
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