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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Sep 20, 2011.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    At the end what seem unreal is and thy heart is true to oneself
     
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    pOnDeRiNg

    And
    Though, I gather
    I’m not the one to say
    What matters
    …Not the one to discuss
    The longings
    And
    Loneliness
    Of the heart
    Or
    The holes
    We find ourselves in
    I feel the pain
    Of your PEACE
    And the
    Ill at ease
    Of this disease
    Called
    Nothingness
    The numbness
    Encompassing the whole
    Attacking the soul
    Forcing us to
    Fold
    But we must hold (on)
    For the new
    DAWN

    It comes.
     
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    I hear you, $$RICH$$

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    Brother Poet baller,

    You are an exquisite writer and a compassionate soul. Thank you for this, my friend. I truly appreciate your words.

    (smile)
     
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