Black Poetry : Nothing Special, Just alittle sumthin sumthin

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Sep 12, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trapped inside reality, trying to escape
    They say ur life is what u make it, but how can I create?
    Blinded by my vision of what the future holds
    But there’s no telling if I’ll excel or if I’ll fold

    My friends are doing their thang, while I’m slowly moving along
    I push myself mentally, but I’m not sure if I’m right or wrong
    But don’t mistake this as a cry for help or a version of my sad song
    I’m just typing my emotions out, so I can comprehend what’s going on

    My family sees the sun, while I witness the rain
    But I am so content with life right now- I guess love IS pain
    I wouldn’t change my life for treasure or for stacks of cheese
    Cuz I have faith in my ability and what god evidently sees

    I just keep the faith and push myself to the top
    I really dont give a **** anymore about the press or the props
    Cuz it doesnt matter, all that gossip and hateration is kid****
    all the lies, the deciet, and the mix ups... what the **** am i gonna do with it?

    I guess I can say that I am living very happily...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight, muy, muy tight.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm really likin' this girl...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....dis was tyte
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you $$Rich$$...
     
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    hi poeticlyspeakin
    i am feeling your vibes deep
    the moment is now
    much love to you
    Peace
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Bluewater....
     
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    i like this
    it was tight
    reminded me of me ...lol
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks mzblkangel...
     
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    Sista, you come through loud and clear on this peice. I woke up feeling a bit "choly", and I found motivation in your wordz........4REELZ.........One Love
     
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