Black Poetry : Nothing Pretty -- The Hate

[liviti]

It’s nothing pretty
It’s ugly in nature
It’s ugly in mind
This hate of mine
Its torture in its perfect design
Ironic we just justify its humanly crime
Separation yet clings in the now
Desperation but always somehow
Fight if you may but you’ll never win
I’m trapped from within
The power that brings you life ends with sin
One part sends
The other infinitely receives
The leaves that fall from trees
Fall from the skies that be
It’s nothing pretty
It’s ugly in nature
It’s perfect
Perfectly ugly by design
It can’t begin and it can’t end
Lost in the spiral forever—never ending spin
Beginning in the end
Starting again
It’s nothing pretty
It’s ugly in nature
It’s ugly in mind
This hate of mine
I can’t end

 

[$$RICH$$]

feeling it deep inside
but hate can not hide
the heart of love pose
can hit hate and make
it roll
faith & prayer is the key
it turns me into a we
trust within and hate will
die now i must take to
da sky
up up and away i fly))))))))>>

 

[PurpleMoons]

Wow!
I just read
and awesome poem
about love and now
there is one about
hate!
Hate is the opposite of love!
Love is the opposite of hate!
A positive and a negative!
A yin and a yang!
A Masculine and a feminine!
Fire and water!
The Alpha and the omega!
See the connection!
In away the both
compliment the other!
To much love can be smothering
To much hate can be explosive!
We have to find balance in the middle!
They co-exist!
LOVED YOUR SCRIBE!!!!!!!!!

 

[watzinaname]

The pace of spiral of this poem, is unbelievable, really. You posed this so well. Really liked your response, PurpleMoons.

 

[gempis]

I agree - this is an awesome flow, and PurpleMoon's response is right on target too. ooo, ooo, ooo