Black Poetry : Nothing Pretty -- The Hate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by liviti, Apr 25, 2004.

  1. liviti

    liviti Active Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2001
    Messages:
    44
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    research engineer
    Location:
    t-dot
    Ratings:
    +1
    It’s nothing pretty
    It’s ugly in nature
    It’s ugly in mind
    This hate of mine
    Its torture in its perfect design
    Ironic we just justify its humanly crime
    Separation yet clings in the now
    Desperation but always somehow
    Fight if you may but you’ll never win
    I’m trapped from within
    The power that brings you life ends with sin
    One part sends
    The other infinitely receives
    The leaves that fall from trees
    Fall from the skies that be
    It’s nothing pretty
    It’s ugly in nature
    It’s perfect
    Perfectly ugly by design
    It can’t begin and it can’t end
    Lost in the spiral forever—never ending spin
    Beginning in the end
    Starting again
    It’s nothing pretty
    It’s ugly in nature
    It’s ugly in mind
    This hate of mine
    I can’t end
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    feeling it deep inside
    but hate can not hide
    the heart of love pose
    can hit hate and make
    it roll
    faith & prayer is the key
    it turns me into a we
    trust within and hate will
    die now i must take to
    da sky
    up up and away i fly))))))))>>
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2003
    Messages:
    9,146
    Likes Received:
    1,097
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +1,102
    Wow!
    I just read
    and awesome poem
    about love and now
    there is one about
    hate!
    Hate is the opposite of love!
    Love is the opposite of hate!
    A positive and a negative!
    A yin and a yang!
    A Masculine and a feminine!
    Fire and water!
    The Alpha and the omega!
    See the connection!
    In away the both
    compliment the other!
    To much love can be smothering
    To much hate can be explosive!
    We have to find balance in the middle!
    They co-exist!
    LOVED YOUR SCRIBE!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    The pace of spiral of this poem, is unbelievable, really. You posed this so well. Really liked your response, PurpleMoons.
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    I agree - this is an awesome flow, and PurpleMoon's response is right on target too. ooo, ooo, ooo
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 24, 2004
    Messages:
    7,007
    Likes Received:
    160
    Occupation:
    day care provider (own business)
    Location:
    Brick City
    Ratings:
    +161
    Hate is the destroyer of SELF, ...it is just as just as, if not more powderful than love. this was very good...keep scribing
     
  7. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 5, 2004
    Messages:
    282
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Atlanta, Ga.
    Ratings:
    +0
    VERY VERY DEEP!!!!!!!
    NICE FLOW!!!!!
    WELL DONE AND MUCH LOVE!!!






    :wave:
     
Loading...