Black Poetry : ...Nothing of Mine...

LovelyGoldenOne

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this is a song i've just been workin on...its not really done yet, i just want some feedback on it...

Nothing of Mine:

Verse 1
Confused in my own mind
The more I seek I don’t find
The more I think, I hide
And I cant take no more of this cuz I
I don’t understand
Why God has such a plan
Where when I happy I get hurt
So now I just wait for the worst

Chorus
I’m just caught in this one state of mind that makes me relive all dreadful times
when I hurt and you lurked and you weren’t no friend, nothing of mine
you deceived me down to wet hot tears, but I’ve learned from myself over the years
when I hurt and you lurked and you weren’t no friend, nothing of mine

Verse 2
Confused in my own head
And I just don’t get it
My heart says I am leanin towards you
And I’m tryin to pull away
Cant give it up no more
I did, he shut his door
Leavin me to dwell on the past and think it wont last more than tonight
 

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