Black Poetry : Nothing had Changed, Exept the World Around Us...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Dec 5, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    YES... my sister you have written such a beautiful passage , I love it.
     
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    "falling into his smile"

    My sister, you have posed this with such beauty. Isn't it amazing how things can seem both a lifetime ago and yesterday at the same time. Perception is a mystic thing. I love your flow, as usual - so good to see a piece from you. Much love and respect, angelicsage.
     
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    My sister angel

    In a silence of tears we stood…the moment seized..i like this linesomething a angel would say :wink:

    magcial mystery of two...

    i love this:angel1:
     
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    Sista poet ,sista poet!

    Eloquently expressed with a heart filled with much love as is evident in the way you write and what you write about...Loving it chile...Please don't stop!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    this was awesome well written and felt within
    lovin ya flow mo mo mo !!!!!
     
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    I was really feeling these words--wonderfully, passionately scribed.
     
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    my goodness the passion of emotion you place in this flow like wow..as each scence was amazing deep from the heart i felted this scribe sis
    Peace
     
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    now see its probably best that this is somethin read and not heard LOL cause I was reading and getting all emotional like..
    "I KNOW GURL!!!!!" LOLOL

    mercy gurl
    words become willing captives in your control
    and everytime i read you...I fall captive as well lol :)
     
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    Caramel….Our honoree of the week…Thank you so much!


    Gempis…you are def’ correct…perception is mystic thing
    You and I soooo share the same vibe! Much luv to you Sister!


    Mzblkangel…your so right…that does sound like something
    And angel would say…Angel to Angel…Much luv to you!


    Msluscious…coming from you…I’m honored truly, your
    Words always lift my spirit….Peace & Blessings to you!


    Awwe Rich…that is so sweet…Thank you dearly! ;)


    Watzinaname…Thank you…words coming from an
    Equally passionate poet! Peace…


    Bluewater…if anyone has an eye for imagery and passion…
    It’s def’ you…Much luv to you! Peace


    Triniti…Girl… I would be emotionally destitute without you! Truly!
    You are definitely my girl!…You make a sister wanna seek out a publisher
    Or sumthin, LOL…Your so crazy…but you keep it real and that’s what
    I love about you!…My Poetic Soul Sister! :grouphug:
     
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