Black Poetry : Nothing even Matters Anymore

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, Jun 28, 2002.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    Nothing matters to me
    as long as I can stand
    on my own two feet, and see the clouds
    cutting across the oceans I see in the eyes of she,
    she is the description of all
    that I would ever want
    not a fallicy
    or a dream reincarnate
    the physical you
    the mental you
    the person I hear when I am being shouted at by life
    and you hear me
    and my bad -distasteful jokes
    you laugh
    and it makes me feel clean
    (to be continued):toast:
     
  2. Destee

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    Caesarlee31 so glad to read you again. Gosh, if you got it like this ... then nothing else needs to matter. Luv'n it. Thank you.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaawwwww

    how poetically sweet
    Natasha :heart:
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Caesar,
    Yes, I agree......poetically endearing...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A very sweet piece.
    I enjoyed the read.
    Thanks for sharing.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    when we appreciate the things in life

    that are truly most important

    that's what makes it all worth the while

    peace

    poeticd
     
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