Black Poetry : ?? Notes ??

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is this the
    melody that
    you wanted
    to hear me
    sing
    or the
    lines of a
    parting stanza
    that you've
    always wanted to
    read

    I had
    turned into
    a candle light
    crooner
    singing you
    several sensual
    slow jams

    greeting you

    embracing you

    loving you and

    releasing you

    and there's even
    a song that
    was sung as
    a farewell to an
    earlier parting
    no sooner than
    the sun had set on
    our private dance

    I've had more
    than enough songs
    to sing for you
    ...and yet you have
    not returned to me
    by candle light
    nor by fireside
    ...so now I'm
    left to sing
    samples ...
    notes ...
    from midnight's
    quiet storm

    alone




    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm! dis piece had da depth of something so greater
    u really worked da hell out dis one .......yet i search 4 da answer!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alone?

    NO...not alone.

    as i've traveled
    here and there
    i've heard you singing
    your lonely songs
    of unfulfilled love

    i've felt your passion
    on gentle breezes
    and wondered why
    you were no longer mine

    the melodies
    ...parting stanzas
    all reached my ear
    while the sheer magnitude
    of my circumstance
    left me wondering
    "am i lonely by choice"
    said a voice
    crying deep in the night

    i hear you

    i feel you

    i await the day when our melody
    will become one
    in harmony with our hearts
    never again to part
    'til the sun sets
    beyond the great sea
    of our tomorrow.

    i sing the song

    i hear you.

    I LOVE THE WAY YOU FLOWED THIS PEACE, N2.
     
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    I've sang,notes,ballads,jazz,gospel,crying late at night for dis man

    Cried, cried, cried
    Love poetry

    Wrote endless stories
    Poetry books
    Stacked up to the ceiling
    Reveal my true feeling for dis man

    And the promise's we made
    For eachother
    Trying to preach to eachother
    Needing eachother
    Inspite of the raining weather
    And we're back together

    Keep ya head up sis.
    Feeling ya

    dis vibe is bouncin back, fa realz though

    Luv ya, gurlie

    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Thank you for feelin' this piece ... :)

    N2
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller

    I'm so glad to have clicked on this
    thread & to see such a wonderful
    scribe from you ... it is simply lovely!!
    I'm happy to see that you could flow
    with this piece of mine... :)

    Thank you brotha!!

    N2
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rykah ~

    Thank you much sis.... :D

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm

    (long time no read & what a nice suprise)

    I marinated on every line that you wrote sistah!!

    Thank you for your words, they are appreciated!!

    N2 :)
     
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