Black Poetry : Notch on my Belt

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissHoney, Feb 23, 2008.

  1. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    Isn’t it funny how I use to think that I
    Couldn’t make it through a day if you wasn’t in my life
    Yeah you know I , would brag about my man
    Saying your ***** cant do what mines can
    There was no guy in the hood like you
    With you all females wanted to do the do
    True! You had all that street fame
    So why I couldn’t see it when you ran your little games
    Shame, I was suppose to be flly
    All my friends wanted love all I wanted was a dime
    Well I guess my wish was your command
    Was blind sighted thinking that I could change you into a man
    What a plan, you gave all those sweet kisses
    Little did I know you had practice with other misses
    Hurts, because I knew you were big headed
    Should of looked pass looks and just say forget it
    Cause now you name will always remain a pain
    We could have had a good friendship, when will things be sane
    Whose to blame, for all this range inside
    Didn’t hate you, till I loved you, and you threw me to the side
    Love is blind, but I doubt that’s what you felt
    I look back at the pass you was just a notch on my belt
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you live and you learn, ya know? when you down for luv, other be down for sumptin else, stealing all ya luv...hee,hee,hee- but dats ok, some need da love more than others, know whatta mean? now ya know.

    was feeling this-
    it was positive.
    DS
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Miss Honey
    Love have so many curves
    to it. Yet we can't let it
    drive us crazy. Whats so wild
    about the game that some plays
    Is that it has away of haunting
    the one who played it. As they go
    on with there journey.
    Wonderful flow sis. Keep it coming.

    Peace~N~Love
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one wants to feel like they were used like a plaything. Like Bluewater, I do feel that what goes around comes around, in the worst way, the player will have his day. Flow on.
     
  5. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MissHoney, this was such an excellent piece. As women we are so unselfish and giving. When it doesnt come back to us the same way it can truly be a hard pill to swallow. Especially when you believed everything you were told. Believe me I know! Keep your head up my sister and keep on flowing!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's so often how one can be taken in yet not felt ....i here ya
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    live and learn

    he'll figure it out one day

    when he realizes what he could have had
     
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