Black Poetry : NOT TOO LEGIT TO BE QUIT (you don't deserve me)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 13, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I regret to inform you that you have no pull here
    You do nothing for me that someone else could do better
    And so I say
    You are not and will never be too legit to be quit
    I'm sayin' you ccan be eliminated from my presence
    and my life
    God's gift to the universe
    I don't think so
    Most of all you're not that good anyway
    So I'm cool and you should be cool
    Because when it's over it's through and frankly
    I'm finished f****** with you
    I learned a valuable lesson from being your girl for a few days
    I see that messin with you I made an error or two
    LET'S JUST SAY THIS IS WE'RE ENDING ON GOOD TERMS
    I ridding myself of all your conceded germs
    And with my conscience clear it is time for you to hear that
    you should forget it you're not with it
    and last but not least you are not now nor will you ever be
    TOO LEGIT TO BE QUIT.............. :nono:
    It's OVER

    :smokin: :argue: :whip: :car: BYE BYE :jump:


    :thinking: Sometimes the best relief from mess is the comic kind :thinking:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya on dis one we cross maze that take us there
    and we have to speak out to let the realism out
    flowhead poetess !
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Not

    This is a straight forward and Excellent write.Gurl, You know he is going to cry.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Not

    That icon was suppose to be at the end emphazing the last statement.
    but it went to the top.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our uniqueness does not make us irreplaceable, but don't you quit, you're legit!
     
  6. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much I appreciate the love and the support from everyone.
    Hopefully I can continue to impress wiht my poetry.
     
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