Black Poetry : Not Too Late

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  1. ladye

    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    :heart: It's not too late

    to come back home

    it's not too late to right all the wrong

    it's not too late

    to realize the mistakes

    it's not too late

    to turn this house into a home

    wanting you near to keep away the fear,

    My love is always here

    with open arms and a wounded :heart:

    from the moment eye saw u

    knew I Luved you from the start,

    so for you everynight I pray

    thatyour love won't stray or fade away

    4 eva wit you is where i want to be,

    so it's not too late

    to make me happy:heart:
     
  2. ladye

    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    has a few errors, so please excuse
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your right

    it is never to late
    nice way to lay it out

    don't worry bout the errors : we all get the hang of it sooner or later ;)
     
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    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    tanks
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IT'S THE WORDS SWEETIE!

    We're not here to gramatically correct
    Come to show love and mad respect
    Never lose site of the words that
    you speak
    The scribe was sweeter than sweet!
    Tighter than tight...cause sho ya right!
    It's never too late!
    Blessings on Ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    never too late my heart feels ya beat ya love is ever so sweet
    now be free write in pink it's never 2 late too come back home
    in the hearts is where u belong no ya not wrong so go head
    bring it on!!!!!!............flying low watching ya close..)))>>>>>>
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Nice piece!.....poignant and coming from an open heart.

    Yes, when 2 people truly want to "Save This Love," it's not too late.





    And :birthday:
     
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