Black Poetry : Not The One

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 12, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    You wanted ur shout out A.T. so here u go...

    yo we've touched places that r hard to feel
    told secrets that have never been revealed
    even touched basis, basically kept it real
    but we've never really been able to just chill
    u wanna get to that level that seems impossible to me
    i got madd respect 4 ya but the thought is comical to me
    there have been days when we just vibe correctly
    but it wouldn't work out more or less see
    i just stepped out a relationship n ur basically still in one
    my heart has just learned to beat again n the healin process still isnt done
    our personalities dont connect, we see things from different points of views
    we're off n on, not to mention i still haven't even seen a picture of you
    then u get madd jealous when i mention someone else's name
    but u the 1 with a girl - save that for someone else's game
    u hate the fact that im stubborn, but thats me n i doubt ill change
    ur too emotional for me and i just got out that stage
    i got a lot on my platter and u just add more food to the table
    i know u mean no harm, but when it comes down to it- its distasteful
    ive done the long distance thing, it just doesn't work for me
    i need some type of closure n id probably end up doin some dirt ya see
    right now i just wanna be free n see where this single path leads me
    i cant take on the responsibility right now, id rather mingle n let others pass me
    i know it hurts n you'd rather take the chance
    but dont wait for me, dont save the last dance
    cuz baby... you're just not the one for me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe ........allow self to be open so one may know
    i'm diggin' dis flow
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice lil scribe u got here

    upin for more replies
     
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    AND Dude still in a relationship, dang!

    need time to heal
    feel what it was like when
    no tears fell, no voices yelled
    and the sky never rained
    on me.....:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:

    niceeee piece.
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte srcibe...take your time to heal gurl:) Don't EVER wait on no boy with no girlfriend...it turns out bad!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, who u tellin lol
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a quote from "Friends & Lovers"

    "You ain't the one, the two, the three, the four, or the five"
     
  8. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice..I like this one. I feel you on the healing thang...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooooh! Girl haven't we all been there....but for you to put it in such words was quite smooth. This is the voice of so many of us, but the strength to walk away, well that's to be commended.
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u once again angelicsage