Black Poetry : Not the intellectual type

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Jun 10, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope none of the males get offended...this is from past experiences!

    Is the man lead astray, once the sight of a lady?
    After leavin his mothers womb, now thinkin with his other "BRAIN"
    Why is it that....
    Those men act like babies
    But no longer wantin to be treated like one?
    But continuously makin them
    (Right?...Right!)

    First foot to fly
    Jetting, Stubbling out the door
    Not even letting his mouth utter the words "GOOD BYE"
    (dang, like that!)

    You think,
    "oh my gosh, have i made a mistake"
    (What are you going to do)

    A man is greedy and selfish
    Thinking he can have the cake and eat it too!
    (isn't that what youre supposed to do with cake... he aint sh*t)

    His mind is lacking a strong woman, understanding of life, and GOD's word. He should manifest what he learns. If hes knowledge was his wealth, It wont be well earned! :(
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is humorous, true in so many ways, and really good writing...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i agree as well wit Lovely
    we do have men like dis
    sad but true.
    but theirs a good side as well
    flow on !
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ain't that what you supposed to do with the cake?...ha ha I liked this poem!!:)
     
  5. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Oh" I hate to admit it but this is so true..... There are truly m en like this out there! Nice Piece Poet (smile)

    AqueenPassing
     
  6. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    an astute observation!
    sad but true.
    keep flowin!
     
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