Black Poetry : not the girl i used to be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Birddgurl2, Jan 2, 2004.

  1. Birddgurl2

    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    why yell?
    why scream?
    do you think what your saying is going to get to me?
    i can tell you one thing
    your words can't bring me down
    i am stronger than what i used to be
    i am more women than you will ever be
    i am not the girl who would cut you
    just by the way you looked at me...
    i am not the girl that would have beat you so badly
    that i put you in the hospital..
    as i just said i am not that girl anymore
    i am now a mature women
    so as i said before
    why yell?
    why scream?
    do you think what your saying is going to get to me? :peace:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this was mos def a tyte poem.....I like what you're saying here......couldn't said it better myself......mcuh luv for this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a well felt scribe poet flow on i hear ya
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah, you're singin my song, girl. much love to you for the strength and wisdom that comes with experience
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With maturity hopefully comes control...I liked this piece.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well said scribe!

    It's safer to put it on paper!
    Like this drop, and enjoy the Playground...
    WELCOME TO DESTEE!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :toast:
     
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