Quiet Poetry Lounge : Not sure.. I know I love her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 10, 2006.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We always do everything for love, we always sacrifice everything for love.

    But sometimes, falling in love can hurt so much.
    There are consequences, and there are some rejections that break our heart.

    It has happened so much. I can hear the shatter of hearts even when mine isn't the one broken.

    So love why aren't we on the same page?
    I cherish you. I answer everytime you call.
    I take pleasure in the time you spend with me
    I am afraid I may loose you, not sure how
    I tend to forgive you and I fall.

    Did I come on too strong?
    That is how I take to love
    It can't be wrong
    Did I bruise you?
    Talk to me so I will know
    What to do, how you like it
    In a relationship, when you show

    Tell me if you want to go slow
    How fast you want this to grow
    I can even take it if you say you must go
    But to hear you will return makes my day

    Slow is even better
    I can do more with you for that matter
    Be patient, it's like air to me.
    I must take you in.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You love me then you leave me
    Why everytime I feel were going somewhere
    you disappear

    I didn't deserve you leading me on
    Why did you in my time of need leave me alone

    I trusted you with my heart, and my soul
    I can't believe I felt for ya I just lost control

    Why I cant even believe you would do this to me
    I thought you wanted to get to know me

    Hold me
    Comfort me
    Be with me

    But it seems your just like the rest
    Tell me what i want to hear that's not best

    If you didn't want me then why open the door
    I felt your passion, your drive but so much more

    My patience has worn thin
    I thought you was my friend
    I can't believe our love is near the end
    But love I send

    Once again my plea
    Can you love me

    Like I can love you
    You know what to do

    But I'm not sure because I know you love me...........​
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's as though the poet's heart had hands attached to pen something so piercingly heartfelt. Beautiful piece, and a great flow back by nevar.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow brother u went there on this one pening down a awesome splat.
    not sure .......i think u do !
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Hodee:
    Your scribe is beautiful.

    Much Luv
     
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