Black Poetry : Not Really (Complicated Pt.2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Jun 23, 2009.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I've posted this before, let me apologize in advance. i dont remember posting this


    I was too caught up in my own emotions to recognize yours.
    What do you expect, I was in love for the very first time.
    All ways doubted you cause I could never officially call you mines.
    I failed to realized that you were there all the time.
    Anytime I needed you, there you were.
    Drove me crazy with the silent emotions.
    I guess you weren't ready to confess.
    You really were feeling me...
    I've never seen one person as so many questions...
    About something so simple,
    It was our first kiss.
    I stepped out to look back in,
    What I saw made me grin.
    Love never comes when you want it, only when in need.
    Whatever we have between us,
    I still got you checking for me.
    So no, it was never really complicated.
    Love just took its time you see,
    Now I know you really do love me,
    Officially.


    Copyright 2007
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, this piece was just too cute, It caused my whole heart to smile.
    Great piece poet, and it's good to see some work from your pen.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the reply.sometimes you have to take urself out the situation to evaluate it objectively. yea it has been a long time since i last posted.

    Correction: I've never seen one person ask so many questions
     
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    When emotions are running high, it pays to be able to pause and see it as a whole. I found this piece to be very endearing poetess.
     
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    the giddiness of fresh love moves the soul...

    ...causing us to ask, WHAT TOOK SO LONG...this "feel good" feeling got me reeling from the abundance of smiles that's taken my face captive...and made my heart a prisoner of its wonders. NICELY DONE.

    the river floweth.
     
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    Great Flow Sister
    This is a Beautiful Awaking.
    To open your eyes and see the love in ones life.
     
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    Woo-weee!


    This was so POWERFUL!

    And THIS line, for me, was the strongest!


    OH! You struck all kinda nerves and stepped on TOES with that one! :toast:


    WHEW! Lemme hush befo' I start tellin' on myself! :lol:
    But, suffice it to say that THIS piece was THA bomb as well as A BOMB! (And it blew up all over me!)
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the kind responses...gives me courage to start writing again on the regular. wonderin y love is currently testin me...hmm
     
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    So no, it was never really complicated.
    Love just took its time you see,
    Now I know you really do love me,
    Officially.


    Welcome back sarcasm4eva, its been a while.

    To finally acknowledge feelings, after you get past the mutual agreement
    there is an attraction.

    Has you contemplating its validity, nothing wrong with that you don't want to be out there alone...but.

    When it feels so good, why fight it especially when everything feels so right....

    Great poem, Poetess.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very true Epiphany. but sometimes its like pullin teeth with guys and im def not a fan of that. thank you for the response
     
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