Black Poetry : Not Really(Complicated pt.2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Mar 27, 2007.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was too caught up in my own emotions to recognize yours.
    What do you expect, I was in love for the very first time.
    Always doubted you cause I could never officially call you mines.
    I failed to realize that you were there all the time.
    Anytime I needed you, there you were.
    Drove me crazy with the silent emotions.
    I guess you werent ready to confess.
    You really were feeling me...
    I've never seen one person ask so many questions...
    About something so simple..
    It was our first kiss.
    I stepped out to look back in,
    What I saw made me grin.
    Love never comes when you want it, only in need.
    Whatever we have between us,
    I still got you checkin for me.
    So no, it was never really complicated.
    Love just took its time you see,
    Now I know you really do love me,
    Officially.


    A Sarcasm Truth Copyright 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we let our own selfishness of emotions blind side us from
    the truth of love or reality of an honest heart until we look deeper and wider
    to see the unseen....well done
     
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    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is truly beautiful...I love the honesty in part 1 and 2 and I appreciate how you can share so much of yourself.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    it was a long road

    and alot of bs to go through

    but you've made it

    and you know love is there now


    peace

    i've heard love is pain

    i don't know how true that is but i'm learning

    peace poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the genuine warmth in this. When love is here and two can claim it, how beautiful is that? Indescribable. Great write.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Took be back on this. Good deal. Lovin this.

    D.S.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx to everyone for all the love n support :)
     
  8. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh...speaking TRUTH! preach on! i love it :)