Black Poetry : Not Real Love

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  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not Real Love

    I love the way you treat me,
    The things that you tell me,
    When I'm feeling alone,
    You make me feel right at home.

    You give me everything I want,
    Tell me the sweetest things,
    The love you say you have for me is not real,
    Because pain is all I feel.

    You lie to me and tell me you love me,
    I know its not true,
    You will never love me,
    As much as I love you.
     
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    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for ibrahim
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, i see!!
    Nice drop.
     
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    Never say...Never, all things are possible...
    love comes in degrees, it will come
    nice piece poet...keep dropping
     
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    love the emotion that was felt when reading this flow on my sista. i dont know if this happen to you but just in case if you like mary j blige listen to her new song cant keep a good woman down. the song is rite on time for me cause in the end no man can eva KEEP A GOOD WOMAN DOWN!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow wow....
     
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    great piece

    great dedication

    words are gems in the making

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    I read this when you were in chat
    This is a nice piece poet
    Like I said before
     
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    I know for me its hard to let go and see love for what it really is. But you captured the pain that sometimes go along with well I'll say love jones because
    Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always preserves.
    -- 1 Corinthians 13:4-7
     
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