Black Poetry : not only have i sinned part 1

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not only have I sinned

    “Tainted Platinum” 2k4

    copyright daniel davis

    All the times I tried to grind

    Grindin
    Trying to thug a g
    The thug in me can’t settle for living comfortably

    Still flowing
    Trying to reach a place I can’t see
    I just wanna smile, you an me

    We can make it, if we try
    But in case u make it an I die
    Just remember my life in the sky

    My dream was for you not me
    I wrote every line for misery
    I don’t know my fate, or where he’ll sentence

    Is life really short, I leave you my faith?
    Hopefully u can use it to pass on to the next grade
    It’s time I leave you, I see the gate

    My next life, what do I do
    I still stuck on you, I’m just a fool
    Somebody tell me what to do

    Whenever u think u can’t make it
    Look at me, and all the odds against me
    Remember; don’t take offense to what I’ve done to me

    If I got one more line in me
    Watch the enemy
    If Jesus is with you, who was against me?
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak your mind
    release it in the flow
    vent it out
    let it go
    the answer only some may know
    yet right now i feel you
    my dear brother poet
    Peace
    blue :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya scribe here deeply
    dis one went into da mental
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin ya on dis
    flow on....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let the mind work unto that pen.
     
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