Black Poetry : Not only a woman,she is a goddess, and I really need her.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by I-khan, Jan 10, 2006.

  1. I-khan

    I-khan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The physical is only such
    but can lead to much more.
    She is a goddess,
    not just a booty to look at
    as she passes through the
    door.

    She has the body of a goddess
    that will only last so long.
    While her soul and love stay with you
    like the words of a Marvin Gaye song.

    She says she is complicated
    we are all supposed to be
    if we were not then simplicity
    we wouldnt see


    I know her well
    or at least i think I do
    her love and soul
    are like a maze I need to
    pass through.

    She is more than words,
    more than song
    she is precious since she can carry my seed 9 months long.

    I may never finish this self-expression
    there is so much I could say
    while we men cherish you goddesses today.:bowdown:
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the way you love your woman. lets me know you appreciate her. flow on poet.:jump: :jump: :jump: :dance: :dance:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I flowed a reply
    In the critique of the same flow
    Liked your flow on this poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said i can see u love her dearly
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW... this is really sweet!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How beautiful, and a king who believes in such should have his queen at this side.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...
     
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