Black Poetry : Not My Type

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    She walks in the door
    and stands next to me in line
    I said " hi, how are you doing?"
    she says "hi. i'm fine"
    looks a bit disturbed
    but being nice isnt a crime
    so i say "whats ur name?'
    and I politely speak mine

    she looks at me confused
    and responds with a 'tude
    i smile and say "nice to meet you"
    she says "yeah, you too"
    but i figured if she wasnt interested
    she say "im not in the mood"
    but nope, instead she's actin all stank
    and respondin all rude

    So i ask "is something wrong?"
    I was just tryna be nice
    then she smacks her lips
    and looks me over twice
    like i got sh*t on my face
    and my hair is covered with lice
    the she had the nerve to say
    "let me give you some advice"
    i look @ her like what
    she says " im not interested today, 2morrow, or tonite"

    I'm like [email protected] ma, be easy
    and say "now, what makes yu think that?"
    she rolls her eyes
    and says "im not single, so step back"
    I smile and say
    "thats not what I asked"
    she smacks her lips
    and mumbles "I dont give a [email protected] what yu asked"

    now im annoyed
    so i dont even respond
    then she speaks up
    and says "you know you want me, dont front"
    I dont even say anything
    keep my eyes looking beyond
    then she gets loud and makes a scene
    im thinkin "this is not what i want"

    I speak up
    and say "stop, ur making a scene"
    she looks around and says
    "no im not, theyre just being nosy, know what i mean?"
    now im bothered
    but she continues to talk to me
    the line is moving
    so she continues to walk with me

    I get to the register
    and say "you have a nice day"
    she smacks her lips
    and says "so ur not gonna wait?"
    I said "no i have things to do"
    and turn and walk away
    she mumbles "i knew yu werent ready
    I could tell you're soft as clay"

    I smile and say "naw baby... its just you're not my type."
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    ......as i the words of Angelicsage.........I love it...I absolutely love it

    this was completely off the rhictor...earthquaking with the hotness

    Poetic.......you've officially wowed me.....this was tyte!

    Fa real!
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    whoa, flowin like a river, and so very tight and delicious. oh yeah. ya did it again, girl.
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    LOL thanks yall, ive been having writers block lately, but its slowly but surely coming along...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    i like this it was tight
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    thanks mzblk...
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    most welcome...
    and ummmm i understand the block...got one my self
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    LOL aiight.
     
  9. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 18, 2003
    Messages:
    502
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Da Dirty South....Texas...
    Ratings:
    +0
    This was tyte....super tyte like always.........
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2003
    Messages:
    1,115
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Fayetteville, NC
    Ratings:
    +4
    this was very tight...i know a lot of people who act this way...but like you said being nice is not a crime!
     
Loading...