Black Poetry : Not Me (I was bored)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Apr 29, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    The subject of the matter is
    not the argument, its u walkin out after it
    this love thing we got goin... i thought we mastered it
    but instead of movin forward, we're goin backwards n sh*t
    i just wanna love u like jesus holds love for us
    and if it cant get that deep, it might just be time to let go of us
    cuz baby, I know many people would love to walk a mile in ur shoes
    no one can ever get u where i took u, no one makes u smile like i do
    but when it comes down to it, i dont move u like i used to
    and if i still do, well u make it more than obvious that this is sumthin you've gotten used to
    if time has let go of our relationship
    then theres no need to stay thru the pain n sh*t
    Im sure theres someone out there for you...
    its just not me.
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm mm lovin this piece speakin of the flame that lost it's spark
    flow on poet:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another master piece lovin da flow
     
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    tight drop
    likes
     
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    this is tight as usual, poet. though because of last night, I am now hearing you read it in my head, which makes it even better. ;)
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely done brotha. sometimes you just gotta let go
     
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    sister...boredom or not...

    when you scribe with

    a rawness of passion

    and it just blows me away...

    tight piece! :spinstar:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one is so uncut!!!!!
    I like the free flowing feel of this
    It's like one of those times
    Your mind is stained with a thought
    And you just sit down and express....
    Those times contribute to great creativity!

    This one is good


    PEACE AND LOVE
    TWISION
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another great piece! nice drop
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    i didnt know u appreciated my poetry like that. much love n maaaad respect...