Black Poetry : not love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Sep 11, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    is love like the love
    of the unlikely love
    that love loves?
    or is two loves that
    love?....way up above the love
    twisted in love
    richly unriched by love

    cas i feel rich from
    the feelings made by the love
    black like angels' who love me
    for that what i ms is love..
    im mad like a rapper who doesnt know
    the love of the crowd ..but unlikely
    cas sweet is the love he loves for
    when he loves the vibes that are in his self to love

    reading this poem and saying u love it
    is a lie
    so why not be real with your love
    show the love for the art form
    think before u write if u love this art forum
    as we say we do ...this one is not from
    up above...this here style shows no love
    of.....words and how they flow...
    but who cares right ?..as long as fake lov is shown....

    hookup.....in love with poetry ...lets write forreal brothas and sistas,,,peace :argue:
     
  2. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do not love the love that is unlikely to love me how I ONCE loved it fo its love that was falsely expressed which most likely wasn't love to begin with.





    What I DO love is......... your message


    Lets be real ppl.... love is love but ONLY when it is real.



    -lowkey
     
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    oh, nice! Love the love simply for the sake of love, but if love don't love me, which is unlikely, I'll love love anyway, out of love for love. Loving it! :)
     
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    Er, um, I don't think it's possible for you to flow without some kind of message....I'll say this, sometimes no matter how strong the message is conveyed, the intended audience will tell you to talk to the hand. But, I'm glad the hand has found it's way to drop ink in Destee's forum poet.
     
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    let us remember that love is not always a good thing....it is a four letter word, it is a powerful emotion that can easily cause it's opposite to come out...but as far as poetry, we have to be careful in dealing with lessons of the heart--people pour their heart from the pen to the paper to the end of their fingertips.....nice piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up poet i feel ya hear ya and on it flow head bruh !
    wave it high and let us all know tyte drop i so love da beat

    And dis some true love from above
    thy so loveth from heart scribe from thy soul
    of love to love and be loved is real even when
    one so can't feel it , yet it's there before thy eyez
    so from above in blessings to be a poet to spread love
    speak love and be of love is beautiful even in madness
    or false temptation da true real self of love seeps through
    i feel ya flow and the realness to scribe poeticly yet can't
    judge the style or emotions that's pen it's deep within da
    true love........word from above !
    peace :love: :deal:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The reality is brotha...that most have lived in fantasy so long that REAL is a foreign language an unidentified entity and when REAL DOES come to them it is attacked as an enemy...but TRUTH is TRUTH regardless of what any nay sayers may claim...this was REAL brotha if I could APPLAUD YOU...brah bess believe i would.
     
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    Yo Hook Up, why some these catz missed the point playa?

    All I can say is:

    Tyte drop

    LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

    You hit dem bustaz dead in they mouth piece, I hope they took the time to read it.
     
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    art is art, love it, like it, hate it. doesnt matter just respect the art. nice flow
     
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    Got to bring this back to the top.
    Hookup, u brought a real message
    let's give love and mean it.
    nice flow.
     
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