Black Poetry : Not Hurtin No More (9 years part II)

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooo...you're gonna want me back

    9 years of friendship is too hard to throw away
    So I guess that I'll stay.....

    Stay as your friend, but I right now I need my space
    Time away from you and away from this place.

    It's like being in a movie watching me from the other end
    Watching my heart heal back from your sin

    You stuck yourself now into just being a distant friend
    You are at fault for pushing me out of your world...
    Because I told you before
    I would rather be your girl.......


    you're gonna neeed me-e


    You stated your choice
    I stated my decision
    It's all water under the bridge now
    I will stand firm on my decision
    But now that you mention,
    I can forgive but never forget this
    You changed my life with just one kiss
    I wanted you bad and you faked like you wanted me
    I looked into your eyes as you told me you weren't ready
    so now steadily,
    You call me and I just look at my cell
    silently condemning you to HELL
    But I ain't hurtin no mo'
    The pain has eased off my brain
    I wiped away all those tears
    started looking down on the pain


    oooooo....you're gonna want me back


    You are going to look back on day and see you made the biggest mistake
    You chose her over me and it will give you years of heartbreak
    Your future will change because of your choice long ago
    God presented you with your soulmate but you let her go
    And I wonder what you're gonna tell him when you get to Heaven?
    "Sorry I didn't know I held a ten in my arms, I thought she was a seven?


    In your life....

    but I won't need you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps he just wondered what if, or maybe he is running from the truth. At any rate, this was piece made me wonder what the future holds for all concerned. Well done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed ya worth is like a treasure one will need and miss
    the truth one seem to dodge or just being foolish !
    stay strong and keep ya head up
     
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    stay strong i so feel ya on dis
    keep ya head up
    flow head on.....Angel
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks watz, MBA and Rich :):):):grouphug:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya know what sista this read like one of those spoken word songs...floetry style...what an idiot smh :lol: ok see thas me goin into protective sista mode LOL hehehe anyway I just want YOU to be happy :) :grouphug:
     
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