Black Poetry : Not complete /help me with a title

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Title: Plug Nickels

    I never meant to seem distant
    sometimes the trials in life
    the busyness of the mind may
    make this seem so, but to keep
    you close (the way you should be
    held) I must subtract delete
    detract myriad things and rebuild
    my being and reboot my mind
    to fully appreciate what is in
    my view / I don't want to
    appear to be some "run of the mill"
    negro not knowing how to satiate
    your soul or deflect your fears
    with reflections of united connections
    of two / My silence is not meant to
    confuse cause contempt or purchase your
    feelings with plug nickels / It is based it
    thought in which each one is a step towards
    you /

    (c)2001 blakverb off da top thinking
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy-

    thanx a million...that is the title!
    thanx for the comp. If you dug that one check out the other pieces.

    one love, blak
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me again...

    I dug it, too :D...
     
  4. N2urSoul

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    Blak~

    CLARITY comes in two forms...choose one.

    Life is perplexing enuf without
    the confusion created by muddled thinking!

    *Cleanse your consciousness by removing
    distractions and get clear about what
    you want...then identify the best way to get it.
    Keep your vision in your mind's eye.

    *Openly & honestly communicate. The clearer
    you are eliminates any guesswork, saves energy
    and "guarantees" that you will be
    OVERSTOOD...
    understand?!

    Remember:

    >We only see others as clearly as we see
    ourselves...and;
    >Rid your mind of delusions and illusions.

    With that dear friend, from my heart
    I will say to you that from
    your poem -
    I once was blind, but now I see -
    and it's CRYSTAL!!

    Stay Regular :)
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the flow blak.......pouring out emotions and sesntivity is what its all about...

    peace
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah BlakV...

    N2 said erythang I was gonna say...LOL!!!

    Nah man, this off da top was all that as well ya know!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    GQ (clownin' N2) is definitely something else...!

    As for you Blakverb...marinate on this -

    Gracias para permitirme saber lo que usted piensa acerca de.
    Estoy bastante seguro que usted estara dispuesto a comunicar con mi mas cuando usted decide que el tiempo tiene razon.
    Acabo de esperar que lo no es demasiado largo.

    Permita que mi sepa!!
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    love the way you think

    love it!
    love this flow!

    very very nice BlakVerb

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    You & Your Off Da Top Thinkin'!!....

    once again i say...

    open up dat mind & let me in.

    (if you do it... i'll let you be
    the President of the fan club...):lol:

    Always:heart:...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I understand bro. I wanna be a Big Girl now:)
    Flow on...It was deep
     
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