Black Poetry : Not as Simple as it Seems...

watzinaname

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And he will understand
when hardly anyone else does
every hidden mystery that ever will be
each forbidden history that ever was

He won't fear intensity
Won't run from my fire
Will help keep the home fires burning
By allowing his own flames to transpire

He will know love, for it's not a stranger
they have shook hands, they have embraced
He will show love, if that's what he truly feels
Release the jewel of amor, instead of leaving it encased

He will allow himself to just...Be...
Even though that can be scary
But it's the only way to become we
With a person such as me...
 

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And he will understand
when hardly anyone else does
every hidden mystery that ever will be
each forbidden history that ever was

He won't fear intensity
Won't run from my fire
Will help keep the home fires burning
By allowing his own flames to transpire

He will know love, for it's not a stranger
they have shook hands, they have embraced
He will show love, if that's what he truly feels
Release the jewel of amor, instead of leaving it encased

He will allow himself to just...Be...
Even though that can be scary
But it's the only way to become we
With a person such as me...

Yeah,
See, I happen to know this person called YOU,
I can say for a fact, very word is true!
For you're indeed a treasure to behold...
Well worth the joy to have and un-fold.
Wonderful piece poet ...^5
 

4EVERLUV

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watz:
I am bowing to you because this scribe just
blew me away.....I really can't even get my
words together right now. The entire write is
so AWESOME. You began the piece
so Perfectly....



And he will understand
when hardly anyone else does
every hidden mystery that ever will be
each forbidden history that ever was


And this....

He won't fear intensity
Won't run from my fire


and the title.... "Not as Simple as it Seems"...nothing but truth.

I AM SO FEELING YOU ON THIS. I feel like you've be eavesdropping inside my thoughts...lol:)
 

$$RICH$$

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relating to the facts
of such of grace in place
it's harder then it looks
but to gain the love
is like moving a rook
da root doctor is the key
and i am of da heart
i'm relating as i know the one
called you !
 

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Watz, you always hit home for me, your words take me to this place where i'm left to think wow, is that how it is? And now I see, yep, thas exactly how it is. Poignant message and loved the title
 

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