Black Poetry : Not as Simple as it Seems...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And he will understand
    when hardly anyone else does
    every hidden mystery that ever will be
    each forbidden history that ever was

    He won't fear intensity
    Won't run from my fire
    Will help keep the home fires burning
    By allowing his own flames to transpire

    He will know love, for it's not a stranger
    they have shook hands, they have embraced
    He will show love, if that's what he truly feels
    Release the jewel of amor, instead of leaving it encased

    He will allow himself to just...Be...
    Even though that can be scary
    But it's the only way to become we
    With a person such as me...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah,
    See, I happen to know this person called YOU,
    I can say for a fact, very word is true!
    For you're indeed a treasure to behold...
    Well worth the joy to have and un-fold.
    Wonderful piece poet ...^5
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    watz:
    I am bowing to you because this scribe just
    blew me away.....I really can't even get my
    words together right now. The entire write is
    so AWESOME. You began the piece
    so Perfectly....



    And he will understand
    when hardly anyone else does
    every hidden mystery that ever will be
    each forbidden history that ever was


    And this....

    He won't fear intensity
    Won't run from my fire


    and the title.... "Not as Simple as it Seems"...nothing but truth.

    I AM SO FEELING YOU ON THIS. I feel like you've be eavesdropping inside my thoughts...lol:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    relating to the facts
    of such of grace in place
    it's harder then it looks
    but to gain the love
    is like moving a rook
    da root doctor is the key
    and i am of da heart
    i'm relating as i know the one
    called you !
     
  5. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz, you always hit home for me, your words take me to this place where i'm left to think wow, is that how it is? And now I see, yep, thas exactly how it is. Poignant message and loved the title
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queent, sister, sister, sister, how you humble me. That is beyond kind, thank you.
    You humble me as well 4EverLuv. Eavesdropping inside your thoughts, huh? Well, hopefully I can write something soon on the order of being understood like I should, lol, and you will be relating to that one as well. Thank you.
    Yes Rich, gaining love can be more than a notion. Your response in flow is awfully sweet, thanks a million.
    Thank you Phenomenon for saying you felt the message, not as simple as it seems, that's for sure. Appreciated, poet of the week.
     
  7. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz....
    my goodness gal...do you ever stop!? LOL PLEASE DON'T EVER!!!! You are something else honey...something else!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll try not to Agabus, lol, thank you for the love brother poet.
     
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