Black Poetry : NOT ANOTHER LOVE POEM

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  1. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :qqb015:(no this is not about me, i am very happy lol but my friends said i need to stop being so mushy gushy all the time and write something that isnt a love poem for once)


    dont get excited this is not a love poem

    no passionate kisses no midnight blisses

    no til death do us part

    just two broken hearts

    not a love poem

    this isnt for those who have thier lovers

    who make music under the covers

    no this is for the others

    not a love poem

    not for soul mates

    or first dates

    but for heart breaks

    and the time it takes

    to realize that when you go home

    your going to be alone

    no staying up on the phone

    not a love poem

    no this is for those who

    long for that special touch

    they hope so much

    for that first love back again

    it felt like it would never end

    but this is no love poem

    so they lay in bed and dream

    of a love they have never seen

    or felt or expressed but none the less

    they yearn for it..crave it need it

    in order to start the heart mending

    but this is no love poem

    so there is no happy ending
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're right about that not being a love poem...but ...give me the love,
    Who wants to take that slow:bye: home to a empty home and bed? ...Who have time or energy NOT to need love?
    Continue to write your love poems sweetheart, cause I love to read them :D
     
  3. 4g0tt3n_Canc3r

    4g0tt3n_Canc3r Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haha glad to see you appreciate my mushy gusyness queent thankyou and i will most definitely continue with my love poems for as long as im feeling it..:blowkiss: here's some love for you!
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like it, just cuz it's real, somebody is feeling that way, and maybe this poem won't cheer them up, but at least they know that someone can relate to them,and that might make them feel a lil better, i like this. although love is nice to, when we're feeling it of course, bless sis.
     
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    Very witty, no it's not another love poem, it's for those who wish to be. Hey we all get filled up when we find love, nothing wrong with releasing and writing about it. Loved the way this was posed.
     
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    whewwww! so nuff not one but in depth like a full cup of tea
     
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    It was not a love poem but I loved it just the same. Very :welldone:
     
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    "love is nice to", i couldnt agree more haha and thankyou for the love
     
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    Thankyou sooo much sister i really appreciate the feed back
     
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    thankya thankya thankya!!
     
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