Black Poetry : Not about the peace its about the pain

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Born in a world of
    Lies and dismay..
    Not about the peace its about the pain
    Born to one given to another..
    To hide the shame…and save face
    And change the name….
    2 families member of none..
    soul fake undeniable…substances of
    lies lay within the mind..choke on
    the word and turned face..
    to travel at their pace never tried
    to lace it just hide undercover like
    a mystery movie shownin highlights
    and left out the reason…of the crime
    that lay…
    Not about the peace its about the pain

    Not about the peace its about the pain
    Strain lay in the soul makin the being
    Cold among others dyin to breath but cant
    Weather always the same
    For the pain within
    Tries to reach and over come..
    But the mind wonders and searches why
    Born a mistake shame destroyed the pride
    And wipe the soul
    Not about the peace its about the pain

    Lead to dismay scandals and crime ran thru
    A family of shame but the little secret
    that was kept
    Soon leak out
    Made them feel weak….
    Not about the peace its about the pain
    Playin da game was lame
    a child caught up in da mix
    Of all this..

    Not about the peace its about the pain
    Define and unfold but what’s laid is laid..
    A destroyed soul and a black heart..
    2 families a member of none
    smoothered in self justice…
    reason still unknown but
    the facts came to light
    sun stop shinin bright
    as everything came to a fright
    Not about the peace its about the pain
    Soul lay low likes invisible as the
    Movie takes place in all who
    Claim but also blame
    Playin da game was lame
    a child caught up in da mix
    Of all this..
    It cant be fix…damage done
    All they do is run…another day of bull’ish
    Not about the peace its about the pain
    Where the peace lays….and da love go untold


    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright:angel1:
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whooooaaaaaa
    sister, this is an amazing piece of work. my god. not sure what to say except I'm just blown away. I bet writing this was like therapy.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep deep scribe i felt it inside
    ride the waves of peace for the
    pain will not last forever
    deep !!
     
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    pour it on da page...
    this was tyte...word
    peace
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh family thanks for the love and the support on dis...
    much love :blush:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You went deep on this one sis... nice drop
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CP...well ya know them moods ya get..thanks for da love bro...:angel1:

    Ola..thanks fo da read
     
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    da pain will evaporate
    just be patient and wait...

    tyte piece
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Thru the pain towards the peace...

    What a shame something so hard that encompasses
    the gifted brain.
    A child damaged by sins of the father or mother, doubtless
    they gave it a name...SHAME!
    Thru the pain see the peace ,of the greatest he has made the least.
    See thru circumstances and find a purpose.
    No child ever deserved this.
    It's they mess no disrespect...
    Let the cycle of confusion end right here...right NOW!
    Thru the pain see the peace...erase the shame it's a moveable feast.
    Find your purpose and shine in your own right...
    Take back your light!
    Let the guilty suffer in the endless night...til God comes and makes every wrong
    RIGHT!
    BJS
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh thanks for the love on this...
    much love to you....:angel1:
     
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