Black Poetry : Nostalgia

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  1. enigma

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    Memories of yesterday that were once my reality.
    Images of love that are now forbidden entities.
    Wishing that time went counterclockwise.
    Wanting to feel something I once felt, again.
    Needing every moment of what you were to me then, now, to ease my unfamiliarity of today.
    Can I talk to you, can we kiss, may I touch you?
    Or would you rather remain where you are instead of leading me to wherever I need to be- without you?
    I remember you, and oh how sentimental you are to me.
    Your bitter-sweet ministry was engaging.
    I yearn for the way you smiled at me and gazed into the beauty of my femininity.
    With your embrace you convinced time to cease, then I knew that I would forever be held by you.
    Until you loosened your grasp, and time finally awakened to precede me.
    Then, was I compelled and unprepared to let go, forgetting to take my heart with me.
    I guess it was time to move on.
    I love where I am today, but I long for where I used to be.
    Will the Creator of time permit you to find me again?
    Will you finish teaching me what you know while we share what we've learned?
    Do you miss your special friend?
    If the answer is "Yes," then tell me what do I do now, and if you return, what shall I do then?
     
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    Move forward

    enigma, The past and the feelings involved can be a weigh that will keep you in one place, cut it loose and walk the path designed for you, for the universe is a lot bigger. The time will come when your true love will be before you, loving you and caring for you, so walk the path knowing your gift is forthcoming.
     
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    the effect that your scribe
    place me in a mode
    of time past
    and thought of
    nice drop indeed
    Peace
     
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    Zen, i wrote this poem years ago when I was still wondering about somethings. however, my past has currently become a big part of my present as well as my future, and i can't walk away from that which has found its way back to me. but, thanks for your input, good lookin'.

    much luv & respect,
    Enigma
     
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    There are parts of this where I felt you were reading my mind. Life does have its ages and stages, but some stages are difficult to leave, when your soul believed in them. Very deep scribe, wonderfully written.
     
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    very deep feelin scribe...
    placed me there and back again
    nice write....
     
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    your words left ripples in the
    deepest waters of my soul...
    beautiful scribe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u enter my mental and i felt it all too
    flow on
     
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