Black Poetry : Nostalgia/Utopia (confusion)

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    Unable to truely confine my mind around either term

    Lost in the midst of the sea as the world turns

    Float aimlessly my life story in my palm

    the rush of emoitions leaves me in the calm

    For the moment but im a jam that common sense cant make sense of

    Stuck in a labyrinth propelled by fear

    Hearing thought of people telling that i can't obtain the ideal

    Ever so real evident by these tears i feel

    My future encounters my past and they concieve a conjoined twin

    And my human form is their seed and the shell im stuck in

    The irony in this matter is that I long for utopia just as much as i long for nostalgia

    and my brain is conviencing me to mess around and be promiscuous

    further ironic thats its being promiscuous

    When we were supposed to be twin flames u decieve me and cheat on me

    Lack of unity between us means there is no us

    One mind, One heart, One love

    However Fear cockblocks all of this leaving the script amiss

    Longing for what was instead of fighting for what could be

    Intervention of what is destinity the downfall of humanity

    The flaw in us all and the one that could stop me
     
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    deep.......i feel ya every word more then you know......wow
     
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    Glad to know i touched you
     
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    it's amazing how poets can reach another where lines run deep in da mental
     
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    ^^ I know
     
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    hey mike just keep doing what you doing because lots of us are listening

    some day we gotta drop a piece together in a collabo
     
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    ^^ its whatever Rich inbox me with a topic im down for anything
     
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