Black Poetry : Nonplus..

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As my eyes open efflorescent in the morning luxuriance ...
    onflowing thoughts of you come into my mind ....
    trough the trials have i forgotten al the beauty if you..
    Youre beauty is always shown in manny different ways ....
    Vieuws of the best movie of the day before...
    and again there are no words to discribe youre beauty....

    as i cry...
    and give you praise..
    for you are so beautifull..
    no no one can compare....

    with that smile..
    with that funny situation..
    with that beautifull sister or brother..
    with that beautifull sky...
    that beautifull bird ...
    with those beautifull sunsets...
    and horizons...

    with those beautifull stars ..
    i kiss them....

    no ...
    no one can compare...
    no doubt about that ....
    even if i may forget...

    Openly nude i lay in the morning heat...
    to the newborn i am curius....
    the tempature is rising...
    still in conversations with you ....
    teasing interuption of he who is one in me i dream...
    and i wonder...
    what do you have in mind today lord ?
    what do you have in store for me

    as you answer ...

    you will see just keep youre eyes open...

    in the wonder i pull a white sheet....
    to cover up my nakedness....
    and i blush....

    than i smile and blush and pull it away...
    cause i know he sees right trough it.....

    and i know there is nothing to be ashamed off.......








    or ..


    maybe ...

    there was.....


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nope nothing to be ashame of in the eyes of he
    this was sweetly done i love it , so warm and sexy
     
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    flo on poet nice read
     
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    Aurora;
    How sweet and beautiful this write is. I so enjoyed it.:)
    Much Luv
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a excellent write. I really like your style cuz
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam:heart:...




    yes this was one of my beautifull moments of my and my creator alone...


    and somthimes i feel ashamed for missing out the beautifull things trough the sharp and heavy trials....


    but he understands...


    i love him...
     
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    likewise sista flower likewise .....continue the journey within his reach