Black Poetry : Non touch of love

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    close your eyes as you rest
    your head in my lap today
    so that I can ease the stress
    with my loving embrace;

    allow your mind to wander
    into places of peace and pure
    voice of serenity so that we
    can play amongst the grass;

    as I watch you find comfort
    and your head becomes heavy
    i gently pull your hair allowing
    it to dictate my hands direction;

    i stroke your hair until you smile
    assuring me you have accepted
    my touch and your cove of peace
    has been located in your rest;

    when I hear you release a slight sigh
    i slowly lift my hand from your hair
    continuing the stroking movement
    yet moving away with each stride;

    another sigh assures me you have
    not noticed that I no longer touch
    you in the physical sense but now I
    have entered your place of comfort;

    with my hand just a few inches away
    from your skin I slowly release into
    you the aura of my emotions as I move
    my hand slowly across your face;

    i see the smile appear when I trace
    the outline of your lips without the
    physical touches and looks to see you
    respond so willingly to my every move;

    then you let out a stronger sigh when
    you feel my hand move over your left
    shoulder and slowly down your arm to
    your hand which opens to meet mine;

    I smile when you open your eyes you
    discover that I am no longer sitting
    with your head in my lap but I am in
    the chair sitting across the room

    With my hand closed in the form of yours…


    "love is more than physical touch...it is experiencing them even when their with you..." ~ dnommo
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No doubt you know how to love as well D'Mo!!!

    Great piece...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u been in my el labo

    done taste some of dat love potion #9
    tyght Mr.D ...............bring on some mo flava..:D
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bro's gotta show dem dere ladies dat there's a better way to express love...

    no doubt...
     
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    yeah ! brutha

    and i see u bringing it correct and sweet
    :D
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man i'm just glad you let me visit EL Labo for a lesson...

    no doubt.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece this morning has left me speechless...it's beautiful, dnommo. thank you.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NO THANK YOU POET FOR YOU ALWAYS TOUCH ME WITHOUT THE COMPLICATIONS OF PHYSICALITIES...

    THOUGHTS OF YOU...

    ONE.

    ***mental hug***:D
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D.


    i'm running out of things to say to you... :)

    'cause how many ways can i say "i love it"
    or "i'm breath-less"... or "your words always
    touch my soul"... or... well, you get the point.

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  10. dnommo

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    GA,

    You? Run out of words? Say it ain't so...:D

    You always seem to find the right things to say...thansk for the read

    Cindy, it is always a pleasure to see you read my works...As for the lucky girl? Well, we are waiting for them to appear...

    thanks for the read...
     
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