Black Poetry : Non touch of love...

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Close your eyes as you rest
    your head in my lap today
    so that I can ease the stress
    with my loving embrace;

    allow your mind to wander
    into places of peace and pure
    voice of serenity so that we
    can play amongst the grass;

    as I watch you find comfort
    and your head becomes heavy
    i gently pull your hair allowing
    it to dictate my hands direction;

    i stroke your hair until you smile
    assuring me you have accepted
    my touch and your cove of peace
    has been located in your rest;

    when I hear you release a slight sigh
    i slowly lift my hand from your hair
    continuing the stroking movement
    yet moving away with each stride;

    another sigh assures me you have
    not noticed that I no longer touch
    you in the physical sense but now I
    have entered your place of comfort;

    with my hand just a few inches away
    from your skin I slowly release into
    you the aura of my emotions as I move
    my hand slowly across your face;

    i see the smile appear when I trace
    the outline of your lips without the
    physical touches and looks to see you
    respond so willingly to my every move;

    then you let out a stronger sigh when
    you feel my hand move over your left
    shoulder and slowly down your arm to
    your hand which opens to meet mine;

    I smile when you open your eyes you
    discover that I am no longer sitting
    with your head in my lap but I am in
    the chair sitting across the room

    With my hand closed in the form of yours…


    "love is more than physical touch...it is experiencing them even when their with you..." ~ dnommo
     
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    yes yes yes .........Mr D. love being expressed in da garden
    so beautiful this was surely the Queen fine comfort in this one .
    tyght scribe brutha
     
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    thanx poet...you always ring in with a smile...

    one.
     
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    indeed at his will i leave comfort as i seek it ...
     
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    wow...how can i answer these questions...

    Haven't publushed a book yet for when i think one manuscript is finished it takes on a new form...

    but i'm working on it...

    as for the form...well, the length is the metre that i used to keep continuity...it is the only rule i follow...

    i hope that helps...

    thanks for the read and the insight...

    one.
     
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    MR.D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I reached Poetic climax as I read each verse and the hair on my neck and the arms started to rise! "I see heaven when I look into your poetic eyes!" Every man should know what you know I think you just began the first journey into Kama Sutra!
    Lord !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No LIL DARRYL IS NOT YOUR BIGGEST FAN!
    I am! Come and meet us Friday night and speak this poem to the ladies delight...Smiling through my pain!

    Blessings On ya House!
     
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    I just want to say.........I just want to say........I JUST WANT TO SAY. Sorry I cant say it. I might get in trouble. Spirtually blown away.
     
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    oh man oh man i luvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeddddd this poem its so real so there so delicate i'm speechless actually all i can say is well keep flowin give me more :)
     
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    smiling profusly...you all truly make my return a blessed one.

    msluciousb...if i can get a mic by then i shall come in and speak this one to you all...until then i shall just relay them here...

    purplemoons...what is it you wanted to say? :lol:

    serenti-poet...thank you...coming from one whose name speaks to where my heart resides (within tranquility and serenity) i am truly honored by your words...

    thank you all for the read as i return to my needed rest tonight...

    one.
     
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