Black Poetry : non titled...pen mental

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    off the top.....

    Cross the horizon
    Within colored streams
    Lays fate…
    A joy of a love so true
    Reaching out for my hand
    As I step within its mist
    On a cold winter’s night it
    Warms my soul and takes me
    As fate leads the way
    Pass the lost land of broken hearts
    For a black rose grows
    He sees the pain in my eyes
    And wipes the hurt
    And holds me close
    Allowing the black rose to bloom
    Seems it’s a dream but fate
    Played this hand…….for the love
    Touches me in ways he have no clue
    From within the blue
    My soul moves as he speaks
    Reads my mental and so far away
    But yet so near
    The black rose blossoms
    In to the Queen of his eye
    Taking his hand I shall do
    Now watch this black rose
    Bloom

    The black rose blooms….

    (C) 2004
    pen mental
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this is deep! Sister, I LOVE this piece. You really gave me some food for the mental. :welldone:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome rose of color love the vibe of dis one..............
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both Rich and gempis for letting me know you enjoyed my flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    miss black,
    this was phat
    i love tha flow here
    forever you will glow here
    one read and i was hypnotized
    straight from the first line
    it opened up my eyes,
    so girl,lets chit tha chat!


    my fave lines:
    "But yet so near
    The black rose blossoms
    In to the Queen of his eye
    Taking his hand I shall do
    Now watch this black rose
    Bloom "

    perfect ending....for a perfect poem.....

    lovin this....
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight flow angel. No need for a title because ya name is all u need when u flow.... :welldone:
     
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    re:pen mental

    beautiful poem.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LURK..thank you happy you likes

    caramelpython..thank you for the support on dis one glad you enjoyed

    Poetrymama..thanks
     
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