Black Poetry : Non tainted

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not gonna take this
    I cant…
    full of knowledge
    full of love
    a treasure only
    few can touch
    pride made you do this
    well pride just caught
    a hold of me…
    not tryin to be rude
    or even dis you…
    but its time you know
    I am no ones fool
    This pain hits like a
    roller coaster ride
    Wish I never laid
    eyes on you
    Wish you never took
    that first step
    In wantin to know
    me…
    I am a Queen
    You can never be my King…..
    passin of words
    the treasure…me
    but never realized it was
    pure gold
    you had….
    A treasure of true love
    Unconditional love
    Non tainted love

    blackangel 2003
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes they don't realize what they have...i was really feeling this...much love.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love...i am glad you like..
    much love girl...peace
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm13...thanks
     
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    wow, that's tight
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    latresce..thanks for theread
     
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    flow on ms Poet of the Week :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks triniti424
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow and yes, its so true gurl:)
     
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