Khasm13 : noid...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    perplexed by what may happen next
    i stare into oblivion vexed
    text starts to swirl
    like atmospheric pressure encasing the world
    the fiery flamming sun
    makes my lips curl
    up into a frown
    are people staring cause my skin is brown
    and my nappy hair is twisted
    what the hell
    do i look like some acient indian mystic?
    that has the power to make the complex---simplistic
    being realistic i say to myself
    maybe there is something on my shirt
    or maybe on my face there is some dirt
    but i don't do that type of work
    anymore
    these prying eyes that gaze into my soul
    makes me want to hit the floor
    and hide under the steel seats
    finally feed up with the gawking my anger peaks
    i scream
    "what the **** are you looking at?"

    *silence*

    im noid on the train
    by the fact that i'm black
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is like WOW......i love it....
     
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    Don't scream Khas...
    Just reach inside
    Those poeple stare cuz
    They see something that you hide
    I doubt for a min
    It's your locs or your smooth brown skin
    It's something troublin you
    They can see it within....


    :heart:

    Thats a tyte flow Khas :)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the stare, replace by silence, you only asked a question...all for the love of you..they are blind, wanting to see ... :rolling:..very nice
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks lovely...hot poet of the week!!!! :hot:

    yeah that's the idea swt t...noid cause
    i think they can see right through me...
    thanks for the read

    thanks bluewater...im startin to notice you more
    each day

    peace
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khasm...you and your maaaad skillz! Feelin this flow.
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks angel...
    your skillz are just as mad...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA!! I like, I like...

    much luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeeeeeeeee! dis was off da hook
    a well masterpiece ! again u have did it wit da noid !
    Tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MOVE OVER ROSA

    Move over Rosa Parks, a very talented Black Man requires seating!

    :toast:
     
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