Black Poetry : Nocturnal Vision (collabed w/ msblkangel)

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  1. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nocturnal Vision


    Jad68:
    Last night as I slept,

    in a vision you approached

    revealing your passion in a love song

    ghetto butterflies fluttered

    on the winds of your melody

    and in your aroma I bathed

    all night long


    Blkangel:
    soft whispers of my heart…

    brought out by you…

    as the makin of dis

    passion love song

    Thy vision in my mind….

    Sent my heart to flutter….

    Sweet sounds of this song....

    that you bathe in...

    the aroma so strong..

    it’s the desire of thy heart

    that makes you

    float as you do to the soft whispers

    of my heart


    Jad68:
    Passion's fire burned slow

    as we traveled to paradise

    in this nocturnal vision of bliss

    Every sense of my being

    lost deeper in mystery

    as our souls interlock

    in a kiss


    Blkangel:
    The mystery

    That have unlocked

    A world of wonder…

    Just with one simple kiss….

    Fire burns slow and calm…

    Taken us though time…

    I dare not define…

    Just let it unfold….


    Jad68:
    Gestating in foreplay

    our flesh yearns to indulge

    this love song at its' crescendo

    soft vocals become screams

    echoed erotically in this dream

    ...Dayum! It's just the wind

    howling at my window

    Blkangel:
    it was only the wind......



    :flirt:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow y'all in tune da love is meek
     
  3. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto, $$RICH$$...

    thanks fam 4 the luv.
     
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    Olakuoto..thanks for the read...

    MY RICHNESS...thank you for gracin us...glad ya like
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

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    this is so nice and sweet...i'm likin' this alot...
     
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    hmmmm...make me WANNA keep my window open LoL
     
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    this was such a beautiful collabo...you guys could have gone on forever...i would have been right there reading every word! much love to you both.
     
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    this is soooooo pretty. just really exquisite, y'all.
     
  9. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    APPRECIATING ALL THE LOVE...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the kind words fam
     
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