Black Poetry : Nocturnal dreams......

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nocturnal dreams
    Of heavenly things
    While mans corrupt
    And the earth erupts
    Shaking the fleas that bite her skin
    The world could any day end
    Apocalyptic forecast
    Deities unmasked
    Symbols unearthed
    Deities given birth
    Heaven cries and
    Mankind flies
    Outraged and disgusted
    Spiritual tools rusted
    Bloodshed on holy ground
    Out from the depths comes that miracle sound
    With a rainbow blessing
    Caressing they ears
    Wiping them tears
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let the nocturnal ones move along the shores of mystery...caressing sensitive ears with tears of warmth...as a jubilant heart swoons.:)

    let your river flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome !!! simply very moving to da soul
    let the nocturnal one continue .....keep flowing poet!!!
     
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    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it spoke to the soul. keep blessing the boards.
     
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    there should be way more replies to this

    this was a great poem

    i just recentaly finished reading the last book in a series
    called left behind thats about this

    great poem
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    replies mean alot
    good to know someone felt it
     
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    This is deep man. Liked it a lot.

    Peace
    Godfather
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx Godfather
     
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    Is it just a dream or a prophecy?
    Brother, you've got a follower.
    Peace.
     
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    Its very real....
    the time is now
    HEll is on earth
    demons are given birth
    various masks
    mankind laughs
    the heavens frown
    But there is a new sound
    to change the vibration
    the souls elation.....
    times are changing
    changing are the times
    destination unknown
    except to the great mind
    the one devine
    from which power begins
    watch
    as reality and myth blend
    ancient ones will walk again
    it has begun
    all scripted
    and created by the ONE
     
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