Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 20, 2003.
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angelic,u are THE poetic queen, i'm almost left speechless after this, this was one of your best, i loved it
i mean oh my goodness gurl
You lit the page up with this one...I can just see you performing this one with the sultry look in ya eye and the lick of ya lips BAM! ya got the crowd in a twist
definitely one of ya hottest
woooooweeee dis was str8 off da hook
i mean awesome
i tell ya tyte scribe
u open up wide wit dis piece
Too carnal for me
Ummmm...Max "carnal" ? hmmmm...
Fanatic – a person with an “Extreme” enthusiasm or zeal as in “Religion”.
Dear Maximus Evangel:
I am unsure as to your intentions for joining this forum but I believe your efforts would be more received in the spirituality and religion forum.
I encourage you to read and “absorb” the forum rules. Meanwhile, I will be taking the initiative in contacting the Community Moderators of this forum regarding the defacement you so ably took the time to place upon my work as well as other poets within this forum.
If you are indeed a true representative of Christ, please do let your acts reflect the beauty of Christ, if you plan to continue representing him. Somehow, I do not feel he would be pleased with your “gorilla warfare tactics”.
I will be reposting the piece for other readers and fellow poets of common open mindedness regarding creativity and freedom of expression.
Feel free “Not” to comment!
Instead of being anywhere near "maximum" you've managed to "minimize" yourself with just a few words.
Are the words in SONG of SOLOMON too carnal for you too?
I love and strive to live a truly "maximized" saved life, it does not stop me from expressing everything that I've been blessed to have deep inside me.
Take the negative and extract the positive.
If ya can't say SUMPTHIN SUMPTHIN nice, then SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!(YA HEARD ME???)
DISCLAIMER:The following was brought to from SHUT THE HELL UP.COM!!(Just joking) LOL
angelicsage - I will never look at the produce aisle the same way again!
Seriously girl, this was over the top and down the waterfall delicious. Love it.
In the words of FRANKIE BEVERLY and MAZE(old skool, some won't understand this. lol ), I FEEL what you FEELIN, ok? lol
And in your GOLDEN TIME of DAY when quill is put to parchment and LOVE is laid open and waiting for you to operate in exellence continue in that mode of conduct.
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