Black Poetry : NoBody's Home

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ringin , Knockin
    nobody home
    don't have a place
    where my heart
    can roam

    knockin , callin , ringin
    can u hear this love is
    deeper dear , open up
    let me in watch how
    ya soul bling bling !
    but nobody home

    I'll leave
    2 never return
    but remember
    ya body will yearn
    ya soul will burn

    I've been all u asked
    i help u stay relaxed
    but u close the door
    now i'm here on this
    floor
    in cold wet drama
    alone
    nowhere for my heart
    to roam
    i see now yesssss!
    nobody home so lady
    i'm gone
    i feel i don't belong
    but this love is
    strong
    u know ya tail is
    wrong
    knock knock !!!
    let me in i have a
    confession within
    to tell but first lady
    do i still dwell
    ring ring !
    nobody home time
    i better be gone on
    singing this sorry song
    :getout: :cry:
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knockin , callin , ringin
    the microphone singin
    lyrical style u bringen
    leavin all the poets screamin

    Tyte for Life Fam.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't imagine why a lady wouldn't let you in. Must be some sort of miscommunication. Call me up then, I'm home. :(
     
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    This one got me:

    now i'm here on this
    floor
    in cold wet drama
    alone


    Dang baby, this is heartfelt. Much love to you, sweetie.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Godssoulja sho ya right in flyte tonight is love
    sweepin the land ...................................................

    thankz watz if they say no and close da door i call ya u know !

    thankz gempis for feeling the wet wave laid on this dip as i slip
    into this vibe

    blessing upon u all poeticly
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knock knock
    It never
    Went unheard
    Take my hand
    Let me lead the way
    Somebody is home
    Never unheard
    You’re all I asked for
    Yes, you helped me stay and relax
    Moreover, I will never leave your side



    feeling your pen and you know this my Richness
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody's home???

    I never heard your ring, nor did I hear your knock...
    I believe brother gin :wine: sent you to the wrong block

    I'd never leave you standing, out there in the cold
    just bring ya self on in here, cause I'm feeling kinda bold

    See, that gin steered you wrong, and then ran for cover
    I been right here waiting... for me there's no other
    ...*come on back*

    very nice piece, I enjoyed this one to the fullest, thanks for allowing me to join in.​
     
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    Angel is that right
    so i'll try again tonight
    leave on one light
    so i know the timing is
    right ....thankz sis


    queentswana.............
    it wasn't the gin , nor a can
    see i wasn't sure of that man
    but i knocked and i rang
    didn't u hear me when i sang
    so tonight let me in
    we be just like kin
    it's cold and wet but my embrace
    is sweet as it get
    knockin callin again
    coz we be best of friendz

    just can't win , lady let me in
    here i am back again !!!!!!!!!!!!!
    most welcome i enjoy the hit back sista thank u for the ride
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was the bomb for real rich but somebody should've answered the door this got me to thinking for real

    MADD galore boys dwell in spring my door bell ring, ding dong it sing song this thing is on // his **** like a tree to the door he knocks for me, oh MADD he jest looked at my breasts and dress so impress he wanted the rest couldn't close the door the sex rose even more" can i cum in?" " guess so for a little while aw girl your round butt is a softy" thanks so you want a cup of coffee? so MADD I'm in the kitchen just itching over chicken but wanna be fingering and licking my juicy coo-chee but he jestd palyed it off he jest slipped up from behind said my hips like rum fine and sweet hug my waist

    moral of the story if you answer a doorbell you can get ****
     
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    Excellent. do this to the scoundrel. :karate:
     
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