Black Poetry : nobody

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Feb 5, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2003
    Messages:
    308
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Designer, student
    Location:
    Mo. City Tx/ Houston
    Ratings:
    +1
    Nobody

    Just me and u
    A usb port
    And a flash drive
    Ooooh
    The boy
    Is missing u
    I miss u
    U can travel
    And shoots thru a blind barrel
    Would u touch me with cupid’s arrow
    I got my arrows on the sparrow
    Tunnel vision got focusing on the narrow

    To get to the point
    I spent 22 years
    With the word
    I grew to love
    More than those who wished me happy days
    I only wish I could be more thankful and have happy days
    But every day I be agg
    I’m broke
    I’m always telling everyone I write poetry
    And how I’m the spoke
    But they don’t seem to see or understand me
    I’m not trying to father a child, but doors says it me
    That shies away from love, and being this playa don’t help
    How can I be the chic magnet when my physique is bad 4 my health
    Am I really dat thoed, am I really a star
    Or do I have a pie in the sky a little bit past mars

    Do I have a pie in the sky

    I got a cell that 3 calls
    One from my benefit lady, other my best friend and a email
    That said bless me, hope u doing well
    Am I spoiled, maybe love is contagious
    I sweep thru many floors traveling pages
    If I flip these pages of all the women I met
    And one will remember this day was set
    For me to arrive, and be a blessing to my fellow entity
    All them friends that call in need, only seconds in vicinity
    Who are they, I thought we was cool, but I soon find out
    How u bring rain to a drought
    How do u let go when ur ex only calls u for a ride to school
    And she left me, cuz she knew her car was comin soon
    And soon to come is anotha day of the same madness
    Somebody trash my feelings, need some glad to see

    Maybe I’ll drop a flo, post it and they’ll feel me there
    I ain’t shaved so I get a cold stare
    I came here today
    Somebody take me outta there
    No need to feel sorrow for da boy
    I’m still growing, therefore I am da boy

    but i'm good now
    smiling
    still

    i said da boy was broke,lonely, sick, tired,
    still smilin
    still
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Sometimes it's just you the computer and your thoughts flowin out...I like this...
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2003
    Messages:
    1,115
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    Fayetteville, NC
    Ratings:
    +4
    this was such a deep deep flow...i really feel you and i'm loving this scribe. much love to you.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    i do indeed enjoy your flows..
    so deep....thoughts rolling indeed
    nice one
    liking this
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    what u pose'd here was da mental mind and da soul
    clashing to canvas of expression of one self
    deeper da answers lay unto u .....indeed i been on this road
    and i feel ya scribe took me back a piece ....flow on express
    poet
     
Loading...