Black Poetry : Nobody

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 16, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody loves me

    Nobody touches me in the night

    Nobody caresses the creases In my back

    Nobody massages my toes when they're cold

    Nobody is there when the morning sun rises

    And Nobody's there when the moon comes tumbling down

    Nobody has a touch that can make the rafters shiver

    Nobody stares deeply into my eyes

    And compares me to a cloudless starry sky

    Nobody tells me daily

    How beautiful he thinks I am

    Cause nobody loves me

    For the me that I am

    I would take my Nobody

    Over your Somebody any day



    Natasha {C} 2000
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...write..feeling ya on dis
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing love the flow on dis one
     
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    I don't know how to take this one!
    At first I was like awwww! And the I
    was like :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    Briliant piece! I loved it!!!!
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    those last two lines
    danggggg now THAT is not somethin you hear everyday :eek: but i can admire the strength that it takes to say that :look: good bring back sista mba :) back in the OG days of Destee.com :)
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a sly way to wrap this one up. Tight drop.
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Natasha,i don't know how i can express what i feel now!I'm just overwhelmed of gratitude for the fact that u've share something so deep with us!If it was a prayer to God,he will have answer by sending u the perfect n better man that have ever exist on this planet!May u be a Child of the red planet,March,"red" like passion.
    Let ya flow coming,i like it
    Peace n luv
    Lloyd
     
  8. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reply to Natasha

    Natasha,The last three lines of what you said
    Was the greatest realization in all that I read
    Natasha don’t settle and tinue to stand proud
    And love will come with actions speaking lound

    Seize the Day!
    Great Poem YOU have made!

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
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