Black Poetry : NOBODY KNOWZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nobody feel da burn of heart
    the way it steam and call out
    nobody knowz the trouble
    i've seen and the pain ur
    never dream , nobody can
    taste the moment of hurt
    and how the darkness drop
    and work on the vision of
    hope and how it blow
    nobody can see inside my heart
    how it's broken and falling apart
    nobody can hear my silent cries
    and see the tears in my eyez
    nobody knowz the trouble i've
    seen and how it crash down
    on me
    nobody can dance in my feelings
    how life deal and kill inner souls
    nobody knowz
    what i face and the stress my
    tongue taste
    nobody knowz
    how i try and the reason why
    nobody knowz
    as i lay in my silent secret chamber
    between the corner stone & rock
    how my world become lock
    rolling in the wish of free at mind
    and how it bite tyme after tyme
    nobody knowz
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed nobody knows
    love the flow
    and i feel this within
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one can truly know another's life, sort of like that saying about walking a mile in another's mocassins. But we can relate, sympathize and care. This was very emotively written.
     
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    Wow! I felt every word!
    Nobody knows how deep
    that has touched me!
    Let it flow brother Rich!
    Let it flow!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel ....sometime anothers pain is felt from da pen

    Thankz watz.....yes we can care and caress the notions of another

    thankz purplemoons... nobody can know of anothers inner feelings
    the pain and the troubles at heart it get deeper from what life deals
     
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    So true, are those
    words you speak!
     
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    $$RICH$$...isn't this a strange world we live in??
    It's funny that..."EVERYBODY know that:
    "NOBODY knows the trouble I've seen, the pain I've felt, how deep my cut is, how heavy my heart is and so on...yet...
    EVERYBODY knows...what NOBODY know.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Money this was it, nice drop
     
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    Brother $$RICH$$ ... this is peace ... the way this touches my soul.

    Thank You !!! :love:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  10. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody knows like you do but we all see the power behind your pen! It was nice to get to read you here. :read:
     
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