Black Poetry : nobody but you (scribblings on the notepad)

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit here thinking about how
    in love I am with this man

    this man who makes me
    sing songs in major keys
    with the fullness of a choir
    of 100 voices
    when he's touching me

    he can be miles away,
    & his invisible fingers
    gently probe
    between my thighs
    and find my tulips
    full of liquid joy
    for him

    he whispers his desires
    and immediately
    ignites my embers
    and fans my flame
    his eyes cover me in
    a blanket of love
    when he calls my name

    I can't even begin to fathom
    this love I feel
    or explain it
    or change it
    but it is most real

    his kisses have powers
    that can bruise
    and heal...
    as if in a trance
    I hold myself close
    steady
    and very still

    ready

    enjoying his smooth loving
    the slide of his skin
    the way he hovers
    in sweet conquest
    as my greed takes him in

    oozing sensuality
    his sexual expressions
    transcend the body
    much more than physical
    the beauty of his soul
    abides in the realm
    of the spiritual

    I love him

    3 words that somehow
    aren't enough
    to convey what he
    brings....and how
    I crave all his stuff

    I adore him
    I need him
    I want him
    I do...

    but I can't explain
    him to
    nobody
    but you

    alyce (c) 2002

    from B-52
     
  2. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think you explained yourself extremely well, Miss A. Leaves no doubt, no questions, while offering something so irresistibly tantillizing to my imagination, a lasting impression and one final expression: DAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUMMMMMM!!!

    peace

    Bert
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOOOOOOOOWEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    LOVE DA ONE YA WIT..YA SAID IT ALL RIGHT HERE SISTAH
    YA SO FULL OF LOVE AND NOBODY FEEL YO LOVE LIKE U
    DO DA DO GURLFRIEND ......!
     
  4. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see many things in this piece. But most of all, I'm feeling like it's all about the heart and mind of the Poet speaking through her pen. And what happens between the mind, the pen and the paper, maybe only the Poet comprehends.

    I see you loving him strong, too. Oh yes I do. :heart:

    Teach

    S~M
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uh huh...my,my,my,....humph! Now gurl! Well, well, well...okay then!

    I felt every line...especially

    he can be miles away,
    & his invisible fingers
    gently probe
    between my thighs
    and find my tulips
    full of liquid joy
    for him


    hot diggity...what mo can I say?
     
  6. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce.....

    you've written..what it means
    to know the comforts of a man...say it!.


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista alyce.


    mmm mmm mmm... chile! :)

    simp-ly put... errythang you touch...
    just g'on be funky!! meaning... this
    was beautifu-ly done. per usual!

    thank you for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  8. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your love poetry, your declarations of adoration for your man are so transforming, it's hard to miss the blessing. Just reading you, makes me feel like anything/everything in love is still possible.

    Thank you for sharing; I've been missing you.

    Saleem
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,
    This was such a sweet treat to read.
    Thank you.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This kind of love is just so undescribable at times!

    This kind of love is so undescribable at times, it just amazes me that somehow you pull it off and make it look so easy...But, then when you have such wonderful inspiration how could you not?

    BLESSINGS ON YA LOVE FILLED HOUSE!:love:
     
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